Well, hello from the Critique Club,
This won't be easy. According to your profile you have entered 1 challenge, never voted, never posted to a forum, and you live in Turkey (although this photo was taken in Kansas City). You have not ticked any of the 17 comments on this photo as helpful. And you have been a registered user on DPC for more than a year. Hmmmm.
OK. The photo. Pretty popular with the commenters, so I can't argue with that (my personal view is a little less enthusiastic). Technically it might have been improved by less brutal use of the on-camera flash. In fact, by no use of the flash at all. Children have bland faces by comparison with adults, so a more subtle lighting plan does tend to maximise what facial interest they do have, and makes for a more interesting photograph. On the other hand the focus is pretty reasonable. And the frame is very nice.
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