I get your point with this picture, but I'm confused as to what the red object is and the thing with the "RA" on it. I think it's a visually interesting picture none the less. Good job.
Sexy, but the writer seemed to have pressed the pen too hard against the paper, making me think that the woman had extremely knobby hands, or the woman was a man. :)
+ strong diagonal lines
+ balance between the lipstick and red fabric
+ texture of the paper and ink
+ I like the lipstick being slightly out of focus, but I'm interested to hear what others throught.