I would sure like to see the entrance way and ticket booths to this theater. Also, focus could be better and I think had you exposed less it would have been in better focus so that you could read the lettering.
A lot of potential for an intersting shot. It's a bit of a challenge without perspective control to make the verticles parallel, but the key thing to work on first is the focus. Long exposure at night probably caused shake. A tripod or setting the camera on a solid surface would probably help.