i scored this one really high. i love the blur in the foreground. it accentuates the light coming through the crack, which ...i can't really work out, but it ads dimention.
i know it's just someone else's designed pattern, but it's really well photographed i found, and not everyone would see it the way you did. nice angle, nice light, nice dof. and good taste in wrapping paper.
An interesting idea. I think an infinite depth of field would have been more effective---it would have flattened the image into a single plane which I think would be create a more striking pattern. The blurry areas aren't reallly doing much for me.