CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Technically, you have done well with your shallow dof. I like the blurred/focus/blurred way you have set it up. Also, the colors are awesome.
Compositionally, it feels a little \"open\" to me. I think a tighter crop would help to focus the attention on the crayons better. Also, I find myself leaning to the right trying to see the points more. Maybe a sharper angle of incident between you and teh tips, so that the frame is filled more.
Overall, this is a well executed shot and fits the challenge.
Good work, and best to you in future challenges. Hang in there and I look forward to seeing your future submissions.
karmat |