great choice of subject for a photo shoot! needlework is rarely seen (at least on DPC); this picture is made all the more charming by being composed of simple everyday objects.
Great use of DOF and great composition. What I would have liked to see was perhaps different lighting on the shirt, or maybe even a different colored shirt.
5 - Good concept, and interesting, especially with the 'shapes'/patterns. Criticism; if the needle were 'straight', especially given your choice of vertical framing, make this even better in my opinion. Good 'DOF'.