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It took me a second to find evidence of shallow DOF in this. I actually like this composition quite a bit. I like the panties used as a design element with the unorthodox amount of empty space above (I'm find of this type of composition although I prefer a narrower, more vertical frame when utilizing it). Sadly, I don't really think shallow DOF does anything to enhance this composition. It actually detracts from the what could be a crisp and clean graphic statement. For this composition to work really well the focus needs to be very crisp and the pink needs to really be separate from the white. I would enjoy seeing this done again with a vertical frame and very sharp focus, no shadows,and a perfectly spotless white background so that it appears as one graphic statement. |