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2 - Good potential here. Criticism; a sharper perspective/angle would likely have made this much better in my opinion. Even at this angle, the shallowness of the 'DOF' does not seem very strong. The cropping so tight at the fore enhances this 'lacking' as well. Although the shoreline may have been 'uneven' like this, with this cropping/perspective/etc it doesn't look 'level' so either incorporating more context to see the 'flow' of the shoreline, or rotating this to create the illusion of a level shoreline, all likely would have made this even better in my opinion. Appears that there may also have been a reflection on the 'fore bird', so (depending what you had to work with), the inclusion of that (and indeed more foreground) may have also helped this. Also, needs to be 640 in this case width. |
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