IMO - compoistion is a bit off. Cropping a bit off the bottom would help, and even better if you could show more of the sky - kind of like the plane was wishing to fly, and looking up.
If you would have put the plane in the lower half of your picture instead of the upper part it would've worked better, because then you would actually get the sense it was something that could go up. Now, with all the concrete, it's less "scary".