excuse me for poor English whom I use, thousand excuses
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Which worrying that that to be inhabited of this fear, fear of the bad smell; fear of inconveniencing those which revolve around me. Thus the morning I take a bath... perfumes, that midday I give that, as well as the evening.
Before bringing together my collaborators around me; I sprinkle myself subtle scent of the head to the feet.
Before returning in a store, I discreetly leave the odorous bottle which never leaves the pocket of my jacket and I go there in heart joy. To the house, all my small bottles follow me.....
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On behalf of all of us lazy voters: your presentation would have been more viewer-friendly if your title included a brief definition of the phobia in addition to the technical word for it.
You picked a tough one since there is no way to provide a "scratch and sniff" card with your entry. The blue "odor" isn't necessary (since phobias are irrational fears it isn't necessary to have any odor at all) and is distracting. Just surrounding him with the colognes and having him sniff his underarm would have sufficed.
I don't get the blue streaks, are they supposed to represent the odor? I don't think they are necessary...... your assorted bottles and the model's action explains it all. Thank you for making the effort to actually depict a fear.
This is so clever in concept. It hits the phobia, it makes an interesting story and there is humour in it. It could have been worth an 8 vote
Then why oh why have you not rotated it so your verticals (the pakcs) are vertical. And what is that blue rubbish all about? I completely destroys your image in every way. You can't see what the guy is actually doing, it obscures every point of interest in the image and it looks messy. Thats really a shame 4
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