the light on the girl is good, and the focus on her strong - fot that reason i will bump this up, however, the candle is incredibly blown out and the light around the flame looks faked.
this image would greatly benifit from less saturation (IMO) also the girls stare is very odd, looks almost as if she having a staring contest with the candle's flame....it both draws attention to the candle in a good way and puts (pun not intended) a negitive light upon the girl. I think this would be alot better after a re shoot and a propper WB adjustment, with less over all sat.