Eyes are separately and excessively processed. I agree with the idea overall, but overprocessing makes them look unnatural. These eyes does not belong to this picture. Anyway, photo deserves good score...7
Nice portrait! I would like to see the candlelight more integrated with the composition though--I wouldn't have guessed that this was done using candlelight if it wasn't in a candlelight challenge. I do like the composition, though. :-)