Haha, poor puppy! I should call ASPCA on you for scarring it for life! (j/k) it's kind of funny but the background is not attractive and the image appears to suffer from sharpness problems throughout the photo. The puppy's nose looks blurry to me but the cheese looks in focus. ALso, the shadow arond the left side of his face shows a harsh shadow which tells me you used a flash in this photo.
I am no expert, but his face looks blurry and the background is a bit distracting. Perhaps if you crop differently to isolate the puppy that might help.
This is hysterical and I love it. Things that could be improved, focus on the nose or eyes it looks like it focused on the middle. Also, I would have put this little pup on a plate and draped a sheet or something in the background. The floor and other stuff are a bit distracting. Overall though, this is a funny idea and made me laugh. Thanks
This is just a supremely odd idea, and not very visually appealing. I mean, why cover a puppy in cheese? The puppy looks so young that I feel bad that he was taken out of his mother's care for this shot. Finally, technically speaking, I would prefer more Depth Of Field so that at least the puppy's head was in focus.