The dark shape coming out of the neck of the bottle is a highlight of this composition. Other peaks include the shadow of the bottle and lighting cast on the folded scrap of paper. I can also relate to this picture as I have truely sleep on many a floor and/or doorstep. Great 9
composition, idea and creativity is there and nice... but i dont think it fits the challenge because apart from your title for this image.... it doesnt show me that you took it at the time given or that you put alot of effort in . . .
Well shot. B&W was a good choice for this. Reminds me of those early crime films. The staging is a little heavy handed, though that may have been what you were going for. If so, a title like "Too Much Drama" might have helped.
Cool concept by the composition is a little spread out. Too much to focus on. Maybe a focus on the number and all else out of focus to express a "bleary" night.