Nice photo! I like the how the light in the window is captured. But there are two kinds of light in this shot. The one from the window and the one outside. I would have tried to crop out the left side of the photo to concentrate more on the window. Maybe an angle more frontal to the window could have helped, too. Photo 7, Creativity 7, City Life 8 = 7
I like the lighting in this photo. I am trying to think of there would have been a more 'impactive' way to capture this shot. The impression i get from this image is that you were walking down the mall corridor and stopped to take this photo. That being said, I wonder what stopped you from getting down low and shooting this at an angle that doesn't seem to be as casual? One aspect that sets exceptional photos apart from casual photos is the angle of attack with the camera :) Anyone can photograph an apple, but how many people can make a photo of an apple that makes you say WOW :) Good shot :) = 6 - jmsetzler
My eye isn't sure where to go here. the floor has some nice strong lines. I would like it better if shot from about 6 paces back away from the window, using more of the outside. But that's just me :)