I have to confess that I'm colorblind, so the red/green contrast doesn't work on me here as well as it does on others. However, the lines and textures STILL make the flower the central subject, and the photo still works pretty well for me. 8
Don't like the lighting. Looks almost like you used the flash. The highlights on the leaves are just too much and there are too many of them. Good crisp clear picture, just don't like the lighting.