very blurry, if that had been only in the light it probably would have been more accepted but the face and eyes themselves and too blurry to remain attractive. I like the gold and red coloring.
Great idea and use of framing, the expression and mood are also good. I just wish the focus was more clear and maybe the reflection of the candle not so blown out.
This image is heavily out of focus and movement blur is apparent. It looks like the candle you have used may have had some visual appeal if the blur wasn't present. It was not necessary that you used a single flame as your only light source. Painting with light would have vastly improved this image, as i believe with better light managedment - this would have beena far stronger image.