For this type of lighting, I really would have liked to seen this back some and maybe off at an angle? Alot of blown out areas that draw attention more than the eyes do , which should be the emphasis. How did one pupil end up at about 5mm and the other at 3mm? (sorry RN coming out.)
Good focus, but the lighting is just too harsh for my tastes. You might want to back off a little (if zoom capable) or use a different light source than your flash. 5 Rob the Swash
ouch over exposed and strange looking because of it.. also she looks as if she's looking at the camera (and thus slightly cross eyed) and fuzzy sorry I have to give it a 3
you are too washed out in close the nose the left side is the worst as the skin and the whites of your eyes just blend together there is no seperation of color