I think this is a really cool idea but the lit sign is just a little too overwhelming. Maybe shooting more from the side, if it is possible, would be better so you get the cool lighting effect but the sign is less prominent.
Is the starbucks thing a peppermint coffee or something? I seriously don't know. Haha, i'm so deprived. Anyhoo, interesting photo. It's like the bright lights totally overshadows the model. Like the outlines. Rad
Nice rim lighting on the model. One suggestion, just a step or two to the right would have brought the advertisement and the model closer together allowing you to put a little more space behind her. I feel she is sat right on the edge of the frame which feels awkward