you did well with the commentors, and that's always good. next step is to connect with more viewers, in a positive way. i didn't vote, but probably would have scored it a 6, just for the grin.
Funny idea. I don't think including the other eggs was necessary and they are a bit distracting. I don't get the choice of black and white for something like this. I would have placed the couple in egg cups and set them up on a harmoniously colored paper background with maybe a few egg attendents, a priest, or some family members.
I was going to say that it's likely there are no embryos in your eggs, but then I noticed that they appear to be fresh ranch eggs, so who knows? :) Zany idea -- I think I might have liked it better in color.