The story is about the yellow pieces.. By eyes are first drawn to the piece in front but i do not notice the back pieces directly after it. With the perspective you tell the story.. try to let my eyes flow from the front piece toward the back pieces. Enhance the depth that's is working there by choosing an even lower viewpoint and set the camera in about the same angle as the yellow arrow on the board. I think that would have done it. However, if i forget the challenge the picture is a good shot.. .. so your still get acceptable points. Well done.
The focus on the nearest piece, which one would expect to be just razor-sharp, is just the tiniest bit off to my eyes. Good idea, though; the picture's well-composed and I like the colors, very vibrant. Man, I hate it when I draw a Sorry with nobody at Start. :) 6.
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