Interesting idea and composition. But the blade on the left is out of place and could be cropped out, still leaving the large black space on the right.
cool idea. interesting lighting. I guess it would have been hard to find one of those spinning wheels. but i'm glad you tried with this angle...just wish that other knife had a bit of a blur to enhance the idea.
same shaped crop, but just the knife handle and the girl's eye/nose would be interesting to look at, the large expanse of black is not pleasant to my eye - find myself moving my eyes like a tennis match.