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Composition: the utensils are too squared off in my mind. Also - too much empty space around them.
Technical factors:
Focus seems to be on the spoon - which is not all bad, but leaves the knife appearing faded aqnd lost in the image.
Contrast: would try to increase the gray scale, and tone down the brightness of the white.
Color: not much here except gray and blown out whites.
This was not an easy challenge to come up with a creative idea. You just need to keep working at it and try to make the shots be something you would value more than the DPC community. Shoot for yourself first - then for the challenges.
- Linda |
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