I like the unusual composition here, rotated slightly askew with the person almost out of the frame as he/she hustles back inside to get out of the cold weather. Well done.
This challenge is overburdened with cloud shots, or at least shots that overly deoend on cloud formations to make their impact - this at least is different from that crowd, largely. I don't really see the sense of cutting the bloke and his shed off at the waist, nor of the implied tilt to the frame (in fact I think their accidental, though I'm allowing you the benefit of the doubt), but the impact of the clouds is more interestnig in this shot than in the vast majority.
Were you in a big rush? So much so that you couldn't wait for the person to take the mail into the house and to get the whole picture STRAIGHT?
I see potential here, but also lots of room for improvement.