Taken laying down on the tracks of the last remains of Geneva Steel in Orem, Utah.
Taken as a color photograph, but not many colors were visible so desaturation didn't change much.
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The ground angle is very impressive, the rails draw your eyes into the image and adds to theme, though composition itself could be improved by focusing on a few items I think. I like the spherical tank on the far left as if it's filled to capacity ready to explode. Maybe a bit more contrast could boost this image as well. Good potential.
The railroad curves and appears to merge towards the edge of the photo. Did you try taking a picture without the curve? I think that might have been more interesting. Would give it the feel of a train approaching the factory for the next pickup.
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