Greetings from the Critique Club
The lighting on this image is fantastic. I like the details all around - but that's my only other real gripe. I wish that it was a tad sharper. Unsharp mask would have definitely improved the machinery feel of this. Machinery seems to me - hard, cold - and sharp. Not soft...if that makes sense.
Not sure the image meets the challenge for industrial. Also - try to use the whole 640 pixels on the long side to make your image as large as possible. If you need help resizing it, search the forums. :)
Happy shooting,
Matt |