Severe crop to remove clutter.
Tiny levels, tiny curves. tiny sharpen.
This scene is in the middle of a wharfside area in San Francisco, with a big mix of old and new industry. Thankfully, we don't see these smokestacks any more in new construction.
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i see you had to make a choice of making the barn straight or making the chimney straight. i think i would have made the barn straight. (how many times can i say "straight" in one comment?)
It has a nice graphic feel to it, love the rich blue and then the rather pale and colourless factory, its a nice contrast. The only thing I find a little distracting is that it looks a little uneven, but this may of course be becaus the building is falling appart.