You've got a good subject here, but you didn't really DO anything with it. The keys are good, but centering them on a plain white background isn't very compelling. Maybe on a stack of bills or interesting marble, with warm light coming from the side?
Lighting, lighting, lighting. good distance, good subject. Change the light. Perhaps a light behind the key s that is brighter than the light in front of the keys, something that makes the subject have a bit more weight and shape.
Very unique and right on interpretationof this challenge. BOL 6 Only comment: focus is somewhat soft.
P.S. You might have added a grocery card or so to the clip!
made me smile, and boy can i relate to that one! i would have liked to see this shot taken with different lighting to reduce the snapshot feel, but it's a great photo concept for this challenge!
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