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I very much like the silhouette of the people on the dock, but the composition needs work. First of all, the horizon needs to be horizontal (it appears to be dipping to the right). I would also place the dock people a little closer to the center (rule of thirds perhaps). The way they are, the people are so far to the side that it's easy to miss them and get lost in the sunset, which is nice, but not all that exciting as sunsets go. The people are the impact of the photo so they should placed more prominently. |