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11/29/2005 11:31:16 PMPost actions
Lacks critical focus on any subject. Also, did you mean to enter this into odd? 5 chips, 1 on each die...
11/28/2005 06:00:54 PMPost actions
from the title I'm thinking the dice should have been in focus
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11/28/2005 04:02:26 PMPost actions
could be sharper and lower dice would look better if it wasnt cut off
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11/28/2005 02:14:20 PMPost actions
With the title Snake Eyes perhaps the focus should be on the dice and not the chips.
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11/27/2005 05:30:30 PMPost actions
11/26/2005 02:32:19 AMPost actions
The tokens seem to be a little over-saturated to me. And, a little larger aperture for more depth of field might look nicer. Along with slightly more even lighting. 5
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11/25/2005 03:05:22 PMPost actions
I think, maybe, it'd be nice if the dice were in focus, rather than the chips.
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11/25/2005 08:22:54 AMPost actions
I do think this would have been better if something had been in focus.
11/25/2005 04:21:13 AMPost actions
I think this would have been better if the focus was on the dice not the chips...
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11/25/2005 02:58:20 AMPost actions
Blurry foregrounds hurt the eyes. The composition is a nice idea, but doesn't really come through very effectively.
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11/24/2005 07:49:50 PMPost actions
The focus is a bit off. I do like the concept though.
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11/24/2005 08:49:06 AMPost actions
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11/24/2005 01:34:04 AMPost actions
seems out of focus...that is if you were focusing on the chips not the dice!
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11/23/2005 06:21:29 PMPost actions
cool but a bit oversharpened?
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11/23/2005 06:02:49 PMPost actions
As it's the dice that are even in your shot, I think you should have got them in focus.
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11/23/2005 04:41:33 PMPost actions
Why is the only thing in focus the very back of the table?? Focus the subject please!
11/23/2005 03:48:32 PMPost actions
Nice idea, needs sharper focus on the dice. Also (just a knit-pick), I would have used an even number of chips as well.
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11/23/2005 02:56:42 PMPost actions
I think the dice should be more in focus.
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11/23/2005 02:31:02 PMPost actions
I am not sure what you are trying to focus on. Not sharp enough for me.
11/23/2005 02:10:47 PMPost actions
The dice look out of focus.
11/23/2005 01:31:15 PMPost actions
There were 5 spirit-level tools (one was mine :)
Did you count playing stones?
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11/23/2005 11:11:16 AMPost actions
Nice composition and the chips add nice color, but needs better focus and depth of field.
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11/23/2005 09:45:15 AMPost actions
I like the idea. Since the dice are your main subject as indicated by your title, I think they should have been the items in focus. Also there feels like lots of wasted space on the right.
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11/23/2005 09:40:27 AMPost actions
There is nothing artistic about this shot. It doesn't seem esthetically thought out. It has a blurred snapshot sense to it. Send some time. Place the objects strategically and make sure your focus is tack sharp. I'd like a scene similar to this in black and white with lots of negative space. Hope this helps.
11/23/2005 06:04:59 AMPost actions
The dice are even.
I get that.
I would have liked this picture with some people included in it.
Looks of happiness/horror etc...
Maybe some atmosphere as well, with full ashtrays and glasses of drinks, etc...
Also, I don't know if it's a visual illusion or not, but there appears to be a kink in the green carpet.
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11/23/2005 01:17:14 AMPost actions
Way to blurry for my taste and this greatly detracts from the photo.
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