Not sure if you were trying to re-create a certain style, if so I think you missed it.Poor background choice, poor taste in poses and the lighting blurring effect simply didn't work for me. I would normally say good luck but with the highly qualified entrants out here this time I think you'll need a lot more than luck.
Very well done. The soft look is really good, compliments the subject well. Nice color an composition, although it might have been nice to see a bit more of her legs down the frame. Very pretty model. 9
When I first saw this in thumbnail size I was expecting an almost cliche glamour shot. I was pleasantly surprised to find that your interpretation had much more depth. The pose is provides a nice shape without be exagerated. The subjects head being down adds a sense of mystery... not who is she, but what or who is she thinking about. The detail in the hands and highlights on the hair are nice touches.
My only artistic question would be why lower part of her left leg completely lost in the shadow? Just enough separation between leg and wall to provide a shape/line through the bottom of the frame would have helped to balance against her right leg. Very minor really, but it's the only thing question I had.
Looks like it could be a really good photo, but I think the processing is way too over the top and takes away from the image. Also the watch strap is distracting.
I think the post editing is a bit overdone. I'd remove the jewelry and watch. I think it distracts from what you were going for. I like the pose and the subtle hues. Maybe back off from the post editing a bit. 7
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