::: Critique Club ::: Well, this is an odd entry to critique. It's very difficult to share some thoughts with you as you've not made any comments about what you were trying to achieve and what your toughts on the outcome are.
First Impression - the most important one: An out of focus, indistinct snapshot that isn't close to the challenge brief.
Subject: I can't see how this meets the Even challenge at all and the title just makes it worse, it doesn't make sense.
Technical (Colour and light): The lighting is careless because you can see the overexposed window. The focus is terrible.
To get a Ribbon?: Re-shoot it. Use a light source that's not visible, focus it, make it relevant to the challenge and give it a title that can be understood - although it should say 'even' without its title.
Summary: I can't believe this image made a 4.9. It's only worth 2-3 at the most. The fact that it scored more just adds to its sleaze value.
it amazes me the way a boobie shot is entered in every challange... the next challange... feet... oops look at that theres a boob. its getting old.. and boring.
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