So many issues, but I hate to be a complete downer......First, you cut both people by the crop, next I'm seeing a casino type lounge (more of a vacation scene) - an extended "break", third - the computer screens - nasty. Color and focus are pretty good, include the bartender in the pic and I'd even accept the challenge aspect. 5 Rob the Swash
I like the angle of this one :) I also like how the bar curves in the middle of your shot. Doesn't really show anyone at work, but it's a good shot overall.
This looks like this image was taken from one of the mirrors in the casino. Am I right? Angle just seems a bit akward, especially since there aren't people filling the chairs in the middle. Also, seems just a tad over sharpened to me. 5