Interresting shot. Nice to see someone try something different. Unfortunately, I don't think the subject you chose is interresting enough to grab the attention. I find myself wishing that the DOF wasn't so shallow, so that I could see what the surroundings look like.
Something very appealing about this shot, I love the use of DOF and the colours in the background are great. The round thingy contrasts well with the wire and background. GL
Although the subject is well framed and in focus, the DOF setting causes the horizon line to be blurred which is making the entire picture off because my eye gets drawn to the horizon.
Perhaps if the picture had been taken from a different angle to exclude the horizon with just the green of the field as the backdrop, or a high DOF change (if possible) to bring the background in focus too (though that would probably still draw the eye away from the subject).