Metallic mornings.scratch. scratch. and liquidify before we can tie our shoe laces. When finnaly in the elevator, I press a number. And the number lights up. And reflect comets the shadowy metallic elevator walls. That are cold. Like shade. But colder.
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I can see a shadow, sortof, from top to bottom. I'm not too sure how to improve it. It looks like it was shot straight on, so maybe a different angle or perspective? Also, cropping so the corner can't be seen on the left, maybe.
Shadow? I have no personal appreciation for photos like this so my input is probably useless. The scratch detracts from the line of light. If that's what you were trying to highlight then the scratch has gotta go (just whip out your buffer),
This is a very brave photo. I can see what you were attempting, and there's a lovely effect going on there with those colours, the brushed metal texture, the shaft of light, etc. But I don't think it quite works.
Whoa, you're going to get hung out to dry for this one, but I see where you're comming from. I love the graphic design and the textural elements that tie the photo together.
This one is a bit unusual, but I find the scratched surface very anoying. I also think (just my opinion) that the shadows are not strongly tied to the subject. To me the subject looks more like the slit of light.
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