The coversion to B&W is excellent. Very well done. The composition could maybe be a bit stronger with a little less centeredness. Perhaps shift to the left toward the sign. The sign is better than the big pole in the background.
Ultimately the subject probably got you. It's too "snapshot" or mundane. We see fat guys throw away trash every day. Why are we looking at a picture of it? That being said, you did as well as you could. I'd have given a 6 just for the crisp B&W. |