The really harsh shadow on the back wall is quite distracting. You can fix this by either using some extra lighting or by moving away from the wall some. Looks like you maybe used flash? If so, just try regular lighting and no flash. Focus and clarity are good, and I like the angle and framing/cropping. I wonder if you could have focused on just one person. Cause without the title, we really wouldn't have known which one was you. Nice to meet you. ~Heather~
This is really a cute shot. I would have preferred lighting that might have eliminated the shadow. It's a little distracting but other than that, I love it.