For me, the female model has movement and, even though she looks rather scared (as opposed to confident and athletic), I think her pose really works. I'm not sure the male model is quite sure why he's there, though. I still gave you a good mark but I would definitely have rated it higher with just the one model. Also, he throws off the illusion created by the angled shot.
Interesting motion! I like the jump quite a bit, though I probably would have cropped some off on the left and left a little more space on the right. The angle really helps lend some height to the jumper.
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