I really like this, although I think you may have cropped a little close to Pat's head. Was there any part of his hat showing?
DOF - I like it on the whole, although I'm guessing you shot wide open due to Roy's lighting design - some of the sacking' focus is off.
Contrast - has this been boosted? I wonder whether you could have gone a notch further - I like the burnout on his teeth and his face but IMO possibly a little more?
I really like the conversion to sepia, and I'm left wondering whether some grain would add to this quite gritty image?
I've come back to this photo about 5 times now and each time it grows on me just a bit more. Love the expression, the colours used, the texture of the fabric, the positioning.. its like a voyeur's position you get to see this amazing moment but arent involved in it. ** and the model is beautiful too* adding to my favs.