This is a good idea but I feel that use of frontal flash in this case may not have been the best choice as it tends to flatten the image. Try slow sync (if you have it) as your flash mode and try to shoot it with a tripod. The lighting would be much softer. Also you cut off one subject's head and the other's feet. The crop is a little tight in this photo.
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