Challenge: The subject is definately off center in the picture so you met the criteria for the challenge.
Technical: I appreciate your creativity with this shot. I do, however, agree with many of the comments below. I think that focus would define your picture better. With the daylight at the end of the tunnel, your subject is backlit. With focus, the lines would be clearer, but still be artistic. I think the ripples in the water are neat and could be seen better. Unfortunately, as well, the background (the light) is overexposed.
Composition: I do like the backlit guitar player. I wish that I could see even more of the guitar, however. The tunnel frames the picture nicely. Good choice of subject.
Once again, I enjoyed studying one of your pictures. Keep up the good work.
He looks very blurry. This one could use some real focus. The outside seems to be pretty overexposed. Tough picture to get exposed right, but the focus has to be there
I'm wondering if the movement is intentional? IMO, this image would work better if it were sharp rather than blurred. And, even though the man is off-center, the roundish hole is pretty much center, and the two compete for attention. ~4
he IS off-centre...and out of focus and underexposed. or the background is overexposed. I think I get what you're going for, but it ends up looking like you just missed the shot. I think if you focussed on the background, you'd still get the same effect on the subject. nice idea, in any event.
i like this a lot. im sure you wont score well and people will think the lack of focus is a mistake not understanding your artistic vision. keep doing what you're doing.
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