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There seems to be an odd tilt to the image. I do like that you have included color in your shot. At first glance it is hard to figure out what these are, but once you realize they are glasses you can appreciate the soft lighting with interesting curves. Your choice of a shallow DOF may have been better suited for a better lit image, with the combination of both dark light and shallow DOF you make it much more difficult for the voter to figure out your scene. Another thing to think about is the human element. A still life like this, with the components you have here lacks a human touch. There is nothing to draw in the viewer to have a longer more intimate look. Your tight cropping athe bottom and right side also leave the image feeling off balanced. I am now working at bringing a less cold view to my work so that the viewer feels more a part of my work. Still, you got an 8 from me. Nice work. -danny |