I don“t completely understand your choice of focus on this picture, it seems that your focus plane is somewhere in between objects in this frame and frankly I find it very disturbing and this is not an image I find pleasing to look at. Colours seem good though but a bit flat, a small curves adjustment would improve this heaps. Meets the challenge though so I gave it an 4.
I have seen so many pictures for this competition of flowers, but never the inside of the flower. That was very creative. The picture is a little fussy in some places, but it's still a good picture.