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The idea isn't bad, but the blurred faces and harsh lighting remind me of a snapshot in a family album. I think if you had zoomed in a bit more on the birthday girl, added a bit of sharpness yet maintained the grain and changed it over to black and white or sepia, I would have voted it better. Keep shooting though - and I am by no means an expert. Just trying to make comments and give my personal opinion - hope you don't take offense. |