I wish I could think of what to say here but this photo leaves me wondering. Without the title I would be lost.
Your concept here is good but I just feel like one of the people needed to be more in focus so it didn't leave you wondering what is that.
As for lighting I just think there is too much dark nothing at the top and when you look at the overall photo you are drawn to the light of the sky above the buildings rather than the umbrellas.
With that being said I will point out though you met the challenge excellently grain can be seen through out the photo.
It's umbrellas, seen through a gap in a wall or fence? No ... maybe they're reflected in a puddle? Could the little bouncing particles be rain? Hail? Popcorn? It's not beautiful, but it's interesting, imaginative and it's certainly challenging. I like all that! You'll get a crap score, but don't let that stop you doing this stuff. We all need to be stretched a bit. 7
Interesting abstract shot. I can see the umbrellas, but my eyes have to work hard at it. Some grain, but compared to other entries, for me, it doesn't hold my interest as much. Guess I'm not into abstracts - sorry.
Good attempt at using an out of focus main subject. Slightly more DOF I think is needed to make it pop. Also a little more contrast to make the bouncing water stand out would also help.
Love this. This is one of the very few times the title really adds to the photo. Wonderfully framed. Great focus (or not, as the case may be). Very cool feel to this. 10
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