this photo is a kinda fuzzy, it could have been in better focus. I like that you're off center, it gives it a different feeling, but it's a little too much, I would have cropped a little off the left side. Good job though
This picture makes it look as if you identify strongly with those bottles on your dresser.. Unless that was intentional, i think the picture was a bit of a miss, I am afraid. (3)
I see spot cream, hair gel, shampoo and conditioner there. This photo says more about you than you think it does. Unless you meant to indicate your teenage obsessions.
Focus seems off.
Strong composition (for me, I like the inclusion of the environment and how that's been composed in).
Lighting a little harsh though works OK in this image.
Hi there, this is David (Levin), right? I like how your face is to one side of the photo. I think the pict might be better if you hadn't cropped off your one ear. Also, you need to focus more on the eyes, and, if possible, make them more prominent - you have beautiful eyes, but they're not showing enough. Another thing is that the background, even though blurry, competes for attention with your face. ~6
Just cutting off a bit of your ear doesn't work well. You need a little more room on that side. The bg clutter is distracting.
Your expression is good.
Yo,
Interesting choice in background. I might have focused more on your face and used a smaller DoF, so the background was even more out of focus. Nice use of the rule of thirds.
Not bad. I would have voted higher if it was a bit sharper. Also the background dresser is a bit distracting. I find myself trying to figure out whats on it.
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