don't like the slight blur I'm seeing on this photo. I think the swans should have been sharper; it's not like the move that fast. If the focus is sharp, then the contrast is what my eyes aren't adjusting to.
I love the concept here. However, shots of white birds are very hard to get right. Here the main sections of the bodies are blown out, or way too hot and all detail is lost. Overall the focus is very soft and a highlight on the eyes is needed. The gentle ripples and lower reflections are great.