critque club**
very nice concept. did you notice that your water bubbles are over exposed? a great aide to this picture would have been cropping in tighter..there is many useless objects around your water tank that would help set the mood if they were not there.
your dof is nice but some of the fishies seem to be a little soft.
heres an idea, instead of doing your entire tank for the shot focus on just a small area of your tank to give it the illusion of an underwater shot, because we can see the tank it loses alot of its edge. the algea growing on the bottom doesnt help either ;)
sometimes going the extra mile for a shot is what sets people apart from the rest...maybe setting a cloth behind the tank with some help of a friend would creat different lighting or perhaps even a color gel. be creative and expirement. |