I like your concept - it shows creativity. I think with a few tweaks it could work better. For me, a bit more focus on the window reflection would make it better and I wonder how this would look in color. The black and white seems a little...flat to me. Perhaps a bit more contrast would take some of that away.
Nicely abstracted. I wonder if the color version might have held an additionally interestiing dimension? I am sure you know which was better. But here the lines exceed the tones in interest generation. 7
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