Looks a little too much like a staged casual photo. Also Teen Magazine usually features more modelesque photos of celebrities or musicians or whatever. I could see this more as a picture accompanying an article within the magazine, although I would zoom in a bit closer and shorter the depth of focus.
Personally I do not consider magazines to be in a horizontal shape... thats just me though. The entire picture looks a little tilted to me... but maybe I'm wrong. Cute idea, the comment of teens on the phone, and I love the expression on the right teens face, shee looks oh so happy, the one on the left seems to have somewhat of a "cool" attitude. I'm not sure if this would work as a magazine cover, especially not for teen magazine which tends to focus on fashion for the cover, and is always a studio shot. This looks like a fun picture for the girls involved to have in a frame though!
Cute models & photo. The image might be a little stronger if the girls were closer together, and moved to the right (away from the distracting open sky & tree).
There's no way this would make the cover of Teen mag. Its nothing like the style of their covers, or most magazine covers for that matter. Camera needs to be way closer in to the girls. Chatting away on the phone is a nice concept, but again, there is simply just too much backgorund and not enough detail on these girls.
yes and it's cell phones now I went bowling with my niece and I won't do it again at least until she gets married for she was on the phone more than bowling.